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I think Frisbee should be included in one of the Olympic sports. Many people, including me, enjoys playing Frisbee and it used to be a Olympic sport back in Greece. I also think it has a clear grade line. You can grade on how far it flies, or your technique.
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I think Frisbee should be included in one of the Olympic sports.
>>> Correct!
Many people, including me, enjoys playing Frisbee and it used to be a Olympic sport back in Greece.
>>> Correct!
I also think it has a clear grade line.
>>> Correct!
You can grade on how far it flies, or your technique.
>>> You can be graded based on your technique and how your disk flies.
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