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I think one of the most hard thing to do is parenting. I agree that responsibilities and commitment is required to parenting. Most people can't be good parents naturally. It's easy to see news about abusive parents and parents who neglect their own children until they die. Because human race naturally become parents when they're old enough, becoming parents is considered as a natural thing. As a result, how hard becoming parents is often underestimated. I think responsibilities and commitment are two basic and essential things about parenting. Parenting is about life, especially about human life and that's why responsibilities are important in parenting. Raising children requires not only emotional care but also money and practical aids. This is the reason why commitment is needed to become parents.
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Hi, [이름]!
I agree 100% that being a parent is a very big responsibility.
That\'s why I\'ve often thought of whether I should be one or not.
I want my future kids to be holistically healthy and I want them to be responsible citizens.
I think it\'s true that when you want those things for your kids, you should be a concrete example for them.
Anyhow, that\'s just how I see it.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
I think one of the most hard thing to do is parenting.
>> I think one of the hardest thing to do is parenting.
I agree that responsibilities and commitment is required to parenting.
>> I agree that responsibilities and commitment are required in parenting.
Most people can\'t be good parents naturally.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Most people are not good at parenting.
It\'s easy to see news about abusive parents and parents who neglect their own children until they die.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We commonly see news about abusive parents and parents who neglect their own children until they die.
Because human race naturally become parents when they\'re old enough, becoming parents is considered as a natural thing.
>> Because humans naturally become parents when they\'re old enough, becoming parents is considered as a natural thing.
As a result, how hard becoming parents is often underestimated.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> As a result, the difficulty level of being a parent is often underestimated.
I think responsibilities and commitment are two basic and essential things about parenting.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think responsibilities and commitment are two basic and essential things in parenting.
Parenting is about life, especially about human life and that\'s why responsibilities are important in parenting.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Parenting is all about life, especially about human life and that\'s why responsibilities are important in parenting.
Raising children requires not only emotional care but also money and practical aids.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Raising children would not only take emotional care but monetary and practical aids as well.
This is the reason why commitment is needed to become parents.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> This is the reason why commitment is needed in becoming a parent.
I agree 100% that being a parent is a very big responsibility.
That\'s why I\'ve often thought of whether I should be one or not.
I want my future kids to be holistically healthy and I want them to be responsible citizens.
I think it\'s true that when you want those things for your kids, you should be a concrete example for them.
Anyhow, that\'s just how I see it.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
I think one of the most hard thing to do is parenting.
>> I think one of the hardest thing to do is parenting.
I agree that responsibilities and commitment is required to parenting.
>> I agree that responsibilities and commitment are required in parenting.
Most people can\'t be good parents naturally.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Most people are not good at parenting.
It\'s easy to see news about abusive parents and parents who neglect their own children until they die.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We commonly see news about abusive parents and parents who neglect their own children until they die.
Because human race naturally become parents when they\'re old enough, becoming parents is considered as a natural thing.
>> Because humans naturally become parents when they\'re old enough, becoming parents is considered as a natural thing.
As a result, how hard becoming parents is often underestimated.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> As a result, the difficulty level of being a parent is often underestimated.
I think responsibilities and commitment are two basic and essential things about parenting.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think responsibilities and commitment are two basic and essential things in parenting.
Parenting is about life, especially about human life and that\'s why responsibilities are important in parenting.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Parenting is all about life, especially about human life and that\'s why responsibilities are important in parenting.
Raising children requires not only emotional care but also money and practical aids.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Raising children would not only take emotional care but monetary and practical aids as well.
This is the reason why commitment is needed to become parents.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> This is the reason why commitment is needed in becoming a parent.
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