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What are some challenges you think the next generation will face?
>>correct
I think that the next generation will feel difficult in finding jobs
>>I think that the next generation will have a difficulty in finding jobs.
nowdays 4 th industrial revolution takes place.
>>Nowadays, the 4th industrial revolution is taking place.
and AI is connected with diverse area.
>>correct
Robot connected with AI is wiser and have no faulty.
>>Robots are connected to AI which doesn\'t make any mistakes.
so Robot will be taken place with man in the working area.
>>So robots will take over man\'s place.
And man will lose their jobs.
>>And men will lose their jobs.
It is so important thing to man.
>>It is an important thing to man.
we should prepare about that.
>>We should prepare for it.
man have to change their thinking and they have to find what they do.
>>Man should change their way of thinking and they have to find what they can do.
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