homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Parents should help. Because it is difficult without parents ' help.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! ^_-
Parents are important and influential advisors to their children when it comes to choosing a course of study.
I think it is important to encourage children to aspire towards whatever they would like to be and have a variety of different options to choose from.
That way, they can end up getting a satisfactory job, if not a dream job. [Linked In]
Thank you for doing your homework.
See you later in class!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
Parents should help. Because it is difficult without parents \' help.
>> Parents should guide their children in choosing a course because it would be difficult without them.
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