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2017-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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If you were given the ability to change one moment in your life, would you do so? Why or why not? If so, what moment would you change and why? If i were give the ability to change one moment in my life , i would go back in the past 10/01/2016 Cause there was a big jackpot called power ball in the USA . the jackpot`s amount was 1,5Billion The reason Why does the price raise up is with the prize money carried over from the last powerball before 3months. at least one we think we want to become a prize winner and we crave having a good car and good house. a long time ago , there is saying "No honey no Money" Anyway we are still keen to earn money . to summarize , we have to live as meaningful as possible this life we are given upron us

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Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


That was a very big money.

Who wouldn\'t want to have an opportunity to win a money that big? :)

Whoever that lucky person is, I hope that he or she will put it in a good cause and

spend it wisely. :)


T. Glenda


If you were given the ability to change one moment in your life, would you do
so? Why or why not? If so, what moment would you change and why?

If i were give the ability to change one moment in my life , i would go back in the past 10/01/2016 

>> If I were given the ability to change one moment of my life, I would go back in the past, on October 01, 2016.
 Cause there was a big jackpot called power ball in the USA . the jackpot`s amount was 1,5Billion 

>> It is because, there was a big jackpot lottery called Power Ball in the USA, the jackpot amount was $1.5Billion.
 The reason Why does the price raise up is with the prize money carried over from the last powerball before 3months. 

>> The reason why the jackpot money was raised to that amount was the prize money from the last power ball was carried over.

  at least one we think we want to become a prize winner and we crave having a good car and good house. 

>> At least even once, we can think of becoming the jackpot winner and have a good car and a good house.

a long time ago , there is saying \"No honey no Money\"

>> A longtime ago, there was a saying, \" No money, no honey.\"
 Anyway we are still keen to earn money . 

>> Correct

 to summarize , we have to live as meaningful as possible this life we are given upron us

>> To summarize, we have to live this life that was given to us as meaningful as possible.

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