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2017-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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What do you usually have in surfeit in your country? ==> Nowadays the rice is in surfeit in my country. Because our eating habits are changed from oriental to western. My ancestors eat rice with a main dish, so a lot of rice is needed. Because of that my ancestors plant and harvest rice for their living. But in present our eating habits are changed to western and there are many foods to replace the rice like hamburg, pizza, pork cutlet etc. As a result of changing our eating habits, the rice is in surfeit in our country.

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This is one great answer, James!

I never really thought about that. Thanks for sharing your observation.

This is pretty enlightening. Now, can we do something about it?

You don\'t have to answer this question, James. Let\'s just ponder on it when we got time.

All the best!

-Klein-

What do you usually have in surfeit in your country?
 ==> 
Nowadays the rice is in surfeit in my country. Because our eating habits are changed from oriental to western.

>>Nowadays, rice is in surfeit in my country, because our eating habits have changed from oriental to western.
 My ancestors eat rice with a main dish, so a lot of rice is needed.

>>My ancestors eat rice with a main dish, so much rice is needed.
 Because of that my ancestors plant and harvest rice for their living.
>>Correct

But in present our eating habits are changed to western and there are many foods to replace the rice like hamburg, pizza, pork cutlet etc.
>>But at present, our eating habits have changed to western and there is much food to replace rice like hamburger, pizza, pork cutlet, etc.

As a result of changing our eating habits, the rice is in surfeit in our country.

>>As a result of changing our eating habits, rice is in surfeit in our country.  

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