Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
This sure is surreal!
I envy you because you got a 10-day holiday. I only got half of that. LOL
But it\'s better than nothing, so I need to be thankful.
I am glad that you would spend more time with your family again, especially your angel.
Let\'s exchange stories as soon as we get back on track. But of course, we still got this whole week to enjoy, so let\'s make most out of it.
Catch you tomorrow!
-Klein-
P.S.
Thanks for completing your homework again.
What seems surreal to you?
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There are 10 days long holidays in this thanksgiving day.
>>There are 10 long holidays this thanksgiving season.
So it is surreal to me,it is first time to take a rest for 10 days after I entered this company.
>>So it is surreal to me, since it is my first time to take a rest for 10 days after I entered in this company.
If I have much money, I will make a plan to go overseas trip but I am poor these days, so I make a plan to spend long time with my family.
>>If I have much money, I will make a plan to have an overseas trip, but I am poor these days, so I made a plan to spend a long time with my family.
My daughter wrote a letter to me.
>>Correct
she wrote that I should don\'t go to the company during thanksgiving holidays.
>>She wrote that I shouldn\'t go to the company during the thanksgiving holidays.
She wants to play with me and to spend time together.
>>Correct
I found her letter in our class time today.
>>Correct
So I answered her request, I will spend all times with you and I will not go to the company.
>>Correct
Anyway 3 days later, It starts long holidays and I will enjoy my free time with my family.
>>Anyway, three days later, we will start the long holidays and I will enjoy my free time with my family.
I hope that you also enjoy your holiday too.
>>I hope that you also enjoy your holiday.
>>I hope that you enjoy your holiday, too.
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