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2017-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hello ~ theseday i feel that the spring is just around the corner in Australia. when i sleep on the bed , i don`t have to turn on a eletric pad anymore and also wear a jacket . Eventually you know the time has arrived when i go to the beach ! It`s compared to korea , Australia`s beaches are very huge and shining which means the water is too clean like cristal i could see a lot of fish on the ground but it`s not that i don`t like korea`s beaches that way ! That`s it ~ i hope you Have a blast day . peace~ 1. She stood up and left the room. 2. He was very busy so he didn`t go to the party. 3. She got up early yesterday. 4. Most of the students in my class found the interviews very interesting. 5. His house used to be on Main Street, but he doesn't live there any more. 6. He comes to school at 9:00 a.m. every day. 7. It was an exciting movie. 8. He is studyingat the library. 9. How much traffic there is in your city? 10. Does it has short hair

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


It seems that you are more enjoying your stay in the down under lately. :)

That\'s actually good to know. :)

Thank you for going over this activity.


T. Glenda


Hello ~ theseday i feel that the spring is just around the corner in Australia. 

>> These days, I feel that spring is just around the corner in Australia.

 when i sleep on the bed , i don`t have to turn on a eletric pad anymore and also wear a jacket . 

>> When I sleep on the bed, I don\'t have to turn on the electric pad and I don\'t need to wear a jacket.
 Eventually you know the time has arrived when i go to the beach ! 

>> Eventually, the time has arrived when I go to the beach.  
It`s compared to korea , Australia`s beaches are very huge and shining which means the water is too clean like cristal i could see a lot of fish on the ground but it`s not that i don`t like korea`s beaches that way ! 

>> Compared to Korea, Australia\'s beaches are huge and shining which means that the water is so clean like crystal. I could see a lot of fish but this doesn\'t mean that I don\'t like beaches in Korea.

 That`s it ~ i hope you Have a blast day . peace~


 1. She stood up and left the room.
>> Correct
2. He was very busy so he didn`t go to the party.
>> Correct
3. She got up early yesterday.
>> gets
4. Most of the students in my class found the interviews very interesting.
>> Correct
5. His house used to be on Main Street, but he doesn\'t live there any more.
>> Correct

6. He comes to school at 9:00 a.m. every day.
>> Correct
7. It was an exciting movie.
>> Correct
8. He is studyingat the library.
>> Correct
9. How much traffic there is in your city?
>> is there

10. Does it has short hair

>> have

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