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2017-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I think I will just leave the woman if she didn't steal anything important from the grocery. It is not right to steal anything from anyone, no matter what their situation is. However, I am not the police, so I have no intentions to force anyone to do the right thing. I would rather leave the woman be, if she didn't steal anything that would cost the grocery store too largely. We all have some kinds of conscience weather you acknowledge it or not. I'd like to believe that the woman with the baby would have done what is necessary to survive.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Thanks for sharing your opinion.

I really appreciate it. I am always impressed with your answers.

Keep it up! Enjoy your weekend!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


I think I will just leave the woman if she didn\'t steal anything important from the grocery.

>>> Correct!

It is not right to steal anything from anyone, no matter what their situation is.

>>> Correct!

However, I am not the police, so I have no intentions to force anyone to do the right thing.

>>> Correct!

I would rather leave the woman be, if she didn\'t steal anything that would cost the grocery store too largely.

>>> Correct!

We all have some kinds of conscience weather you acknowledge it or not.

>>> We all have a conscience whether you acknowledge it or not.  

I\'d like to believe that the woman with the baby would have done what is necessary to survive.

>>> Correct!

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