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2017-10-03 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hello~ how did you spend your weekend? i wish the weekend was good time! Theseday i`ve been working so i`haven`t studied a english recently but i don`t feel gulity If i feel gulity about not studying english , i`d think it`s ashamed myself In my case i`m learning english as working in Australia sometimes when i don`t understand what they said, i sense roughly and i say what they want to say or i ask then what do you mean ? what does that mean ? ESSAY: Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. What was the biggest risk you have done so far? The biggest risk in my life i`ve done so far is to come in Australia . who knows i`m working with people from other countries as speaking english ??? and i live apart from my parents ??? I still wonder how did i get here ?? what did i do? as living here there were so many things i went through in here .

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


Thank you for sending me this homework. :)

Well, just remember that learning is repetition. 

It\'s a good thing that you get to speak English a lot because of your environment. 

However, taking at least a short time to go over the basics of English will do you good.

I hope you will find time to spare to study more on English. :)

Have a great time! ^^


T. Glenda


Hello~ how did you spend your weekend? i wish the weekend was good time!

>> Correct

or

>>> I wish you had a good weekend.
 Theseday i`ve been working so i`haven`t studied a english recently but i don`t feel gulity 

>> These day I`ve been working so I haven`t been able to study English recently but I didn`t feel guilty.

 If i feel gulity about not studying english , i`d think it`s ashamed myself 

>> If I feel guilty about not studying English, I think I\'d be ashamed of myself.
 In my case i`m learning english as working in Australia sometimes when i don`t understand what they said, i sense roughly and i say what they want to say or i ask then what do you mean ? what does that mean ?    

>> In my case, I`m learning English as I work here in Australia.     Sometimes when I don`t understand what they say, I try to sense it roughly and I say what they want to say or  I ask,  \'what do you mean\' or what does that mean ?     

 ESSAY: Some people like to do only what they already do
well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks.
What was the biggest risk you have done so far?

The biggest risk in my life
I\'ve done so far is to come in Australia . 

>> Correct

or

>>> The biggest risk I\'ve done in my life so far is to come here in Australia.

 who knows i`m working with people from other countries as speaking english ??? and i live apart from my parents ???

>> Who would have thought that I would be working with people from other countries that speaks English? And that I would live apart from my parents.
 I still wonder how did I get here ?? what did I do? as living here there were so many things I went through in here .

>>   I still wonder how did I get here ?? what did I do? I went through a lot of things while living her.

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