Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Well, we have said our goodbyes and I know that you are in good hands
with Teacher Kelly. :)
I will miss you. :D
Continue practicing and improving! ^^
Teacher Glenda
Hi how are you ???? Glenda did you have a good time for the past week?
>> Correct
I only worked for the last week instead of enjoying the chouseok
>> Correct
or
>>> I worked last week instead of celebrating Chuseok.
Even though i worked , one day on my day off i called my mom to say hello and i said to my family
\" how are you ? , are you guys all doing fine? doesn`t it hurt in your body? \"
>> Even though I was working, I ca;;ed my family on my day off and asked how they are doing and about their health.
Thankfully they`re all fine after calling i felt i wanna go a real my house which means sitting on the table and eating a rice cake soup and taliking our family life
>> Thankfully they are all fine, however, after calling I felt like I want to go home to my real home. It means sitting at the table and earing rice cake soup and talking with my family about our lives.
Glenda i have something to tell you literally, we can`t do our class anymore cuz there`s a couple of reasons .
>> Glenda, I have something to tell you. We can\'t do our class anymore because of couple of reasons.
In Australia there is a daylight saving time which is to save energy and the people can make best use of our time .
>> Correct
so there will be about two-hour difference between in Australia and korea. that`s why we can`t ..
>> So there will be about two-hours difference between Australia and Korea, that`s why we can`t have our class anymore.
i looked your schedule up But there`s no time we can make our class.
>> I checked your schedule but there was no time that we can make our class.
probably we seem to see for each other on january 19th ?? or when i am in korea :)
>> Most probably, we will see each other on January 19th or when I\'m in Korea.
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