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2017-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi how are you ???? Glenda did you have a good time for the past week? I only worked for the last week instead of enjoying the chouseok Even though i worked , one day on my day off i called my mom to say hello and i said to my family " how are you ? , are you guys all doing fine? doesn`t it hurt in your body? " Thankfully they`re all fine after calling i felt i wanna go a real my house which means sitting on the table and eating a rice cake soup and taliking our family life Glenda i have something to tell you literally, we can`t do our class anymore cuz there`s a couple of reasons . in Australia there is a daylight saving time which is to save energy and the people can make best use of our time . so there will be about two-hour difference between in Australia and korea. that`s why we can`t .. i looked your schedule up But there`s no time we can make our class. probably we seem to see for each other on january 19th ?? or when i am in korea :)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


Well, we have said our goodbyes and I know that you are in good hands

with Teacher Kelly.  :)

I will miss you. :D

Continue practicing and improving! ^^


Teacher Glenda



Hi how are you ???? Glenda did you have a good time for the past week? 

>> Correct
 I only worked for the last week instead of enjoying the chouseok 

>> Correct

or

>>> I worked last week instead of celebrating Chuseok.
 Even though i worked , one day on my day off i called my mom to say hello and i said to my family
\" how are you ? , are you guys all doing fine? doesn`t it hurt in your body? \"

>> Even though I was working, I ca;;ed my family on my day off and asked how they are doing and about their health.
 Thankfully they`re all fine after calling i felt i wanna go a real my house which means sitting on the table and eating a rice cake soup and taliking our family life 

>> Thankfully they are all fine, however, after calling I felt like I want to go home to my real home. It means sitting at the table and earing rice cake soup and talking with my family about our lives.


Glenda i have something to tell you literally, we can`t do our class anymore cuz there`s a couple of reasons . 

>> Glenda, I have something to tell you. We can\'t do our class anymore because of couple of reasons.

 In Australia there is a daylight saving time which is to save energy and the people can make best use of our time . 

>> Correct

 so there will be about two-hour difference between in Australia and korea. that`s why we can`t .. 

>> So there will be about two-hours difference between Australia and Korea,  that`s why we can`t have our class anymore. 

 i looked your schedule up But there`s no time we can make our class. 

>> I checked your schedule but there was no time that we can make our class. 

  probably we seem to see for each other on january 19th ?? or when i am in korea :)

>> Most probably, we will see each other on January 19th or when I\'m in Korea.

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