homework

2017-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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7/31 write an essay about the biggest disappointment you've ever experienced. Recently, I realized that I don't have any feelings when I do something. When I was with my students, I was so excited with small things. Nowadays, I can't feel that I had before. I am so disappointed how I have been changed.

강사 첨삭

Everybody changes Miss [이름].

I understand where you\'re coming from because I also have the same issue.

Anyway, they say as we grow older, we can experience a lot of changes in our physical appearance and personality. C\"0

Have a great day!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

7/31 write an essay about the biggest disappointment you\'ve ever experienced.

Recently, I realized that I don\'t have any feelings when I do something.

>>> Correct!
When I was with my students, I was so excited with small things.

>>> Correct!
Nowadays, I can\'t feel that I had before.

>>> Nowadays, I don\'t feel the way I did before.

I am so disappointed how I have been changed.

>>> I am so disappointed with how I changed.

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