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2017-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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8/3 Tell me about a time when you almost lost your confidence. When I went to the Philippines to learn English, I lost my confidence. I couldn't understand and speak so I felt that I was a baby and I was getting small. I realized that communication is really important to be grown up.

강사 첨삭

Your effort has already paid off.

You\'re no longer that person who just started learning English Miss [이름].

I admire you for your improvements.  C\")

~Teacher Shanee^^,


8/3 Tell me about a time when you almost lost your confidence.

When I went to the Philippines to learn English, I lost my confidence.

>>> Correct!
I couldn\'t understand and speak so I felt that I was a baby and I was getting small.

>>> OR: I couldn\'t speak or understand the language so I felt really small.

I realized that communication is really important to be grown up.

>>> I realized that being able to communicate is a factor to be called a grown up.

>>> OR: I realized that skill in communication is very important for grown ups.

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