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2017-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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8/7 Write about the customs in your country visitors might find strange? There are many customs which is strange for foreigners. I would like to share one thing which they can't understand. That is "AGE" In Korea, when the baby is born, he or she is one year old. So there is a different system of measuring. One more thing is that friends can't be if they have different ages.

강사 첨삭

It\'s really important to know the different cultures of the countries you plan to visit.

That is for you not be surprised and that you will be able to get much more of your time in those places. Thanks for sharing these Miss [이름]!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

8/7 Write about the customs in your country visitors might find strange?

There are many customs which is strange for foreigners.

>>> There are many customs which are strange for foreigners.
I would like to share one thing which they can\'t understand.

>>> Correct!
That is \"AGE\"

>>> Correct! [.]
In Korea, when the baby is born, he or she is one year old.

>>> Correct!
So there is a different system of measuring.

>>> Correct!
One more thing is that friends can\'t be if they have different ages.

>>> One more thing is that people of different age can\'t be friends,

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