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2017-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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8/21 Have you ever experienced being let down by a friend? Tell me about it. It is a common situation. I was in difficult spot when I was studying abroad. I asked my close friends to borrow some money. But nobody lent some money to me. Except one friend. I thought all friends trust me a lot. After this experience, I don't trust people.

강사 첨삭

I am sorry to hear about that experience Miss [이름].

That must have hurt you a lot.

Anyway, at least there\'s one who still trusted you.

That person is a friend to keep. C\")

~Teacher Shanee^^,


8/21
Have you ever experienced being let down by a friend? Tell me about it.

It is a common situation.

>>> Correct!

I was in difficult spot when I was studying
abroad.

>>> I was in a difficult spot when I was studying abroad.

I asked my close friends to borrow some money.

>>> I approached my close friends to borrow some money.

>>> OR: I tried to borrow money from my close friends.

But nobody lent some money to me. Except one friend.

>>> But nobody lent me some money except for one friend.

I thought all friends trust me a lot.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: I thought all of my friends trust me a lot.

After this experience, I don\'t trust people.

>>> Correct!

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