homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I am sorry to hear about that experience Miss [이름].
That must have hurt you a lot.
Anyway, at least there\'s one who still trusted you.
That person is a friend to keep. C\")
~Teacher Shanee^^,
8/21
Have you ever experienced being let down by a friend? Tell me about it.
It is a common situation.
>>> Correct!
I was in difficult spot when I was studying
abroad.
>>> I was in a difficult spot when I was studying abroad.
I asked my close friends to borrow some money.
>>> I approached my close friends to borrow some money.
>>> OR: I tried to borrow money from my close friends.
But nobody lent some money to me. Except one friend.
>>> But nobody lent me some money except for one friend.
I thought all friends trust me a lot.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: I thought all of my friends trust me a lot.
After this experience, I don\'t trust people.
>>> Correct!
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