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2017-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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8/25 Write an essay about a dangerous experience you had. I had a car accident 10 years ago. I worked late and drove to home. I was so tired and s[이름]py but I wanted to go home quickly. Suddenly, there was a big crush. I woke up and realized I wa driving in as[이름]p. I was ok however I was so scared of that time!

강사 첨삭

Be careful when you\'re driving Miss [이름].

Always stay safe. C\")

~Teacher Shanee^^,


8/25 Write an essay about a dangerous experience you had.

I had a car accident 10 years ago.

>>> Correct!
 I worked late and drove to home.

>>> I worked late and drove home.
 I was so tired and s[이름]py but I wanted to go home quickly.

>>> Correct!
Suddenly, there was a big crush.

>>> Correct!

I woke up and realized I wa driving
in as[이름]p.

>>> I woke up and realized I was driving as[이름]p.

I was ok however I was so scared of that time!

>>> I was okay however, I was scared that time.

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