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If I have to choose one between being realistic and optimistic, I would to choose to be realistic. Both have their own usage in different situations. Optimistic behavior is helpful when people do everything they can do. Even when people do their best, there are still role of luck to succeed. In that case, being optimistic is maybe the most practical way and good for mental health because people can't do anything more. In other cases, being optimistic can be more helpful. Being optimistic is often considered as being negative but I think they are different. Observing both good and bad sides is an exact meaning of practical attitude. Therefore being practical until reach a certain level and being optimistic when waiting the result might be a good way to maintain inner peace.
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Hello, [이름]!
Whew! This day is about to end for me at work.
Everything is going well so far. ^_^
Thank you for writing this wonderful essay.
I am also a practical person and I tend to mix the attitudes of being optimistic and realistic.
When I do something, I give it my best shot and I do everything that I can.
If it doesn\'t go well, so be it.
But I know for a fact that I did everything that I could.
Anyhow, that\'s just how I do things.
I always aim for good results.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
If I have to choose one between being realistic and optimistic, I would to choose to be realistic.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If I need to choose between being realistic and optimistic, I would go for being realistic.
Both have their own usage in different situations.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Both have their own purposes in different situations.
Optimistic behavior is helpful when people do everything they can do.
>> An optimistic behavior is helpful when people do everything they can do.
Even when people do their best, there are still role of luck to succeed.
>> Even when people do their best, luck still has a role to success.
In that case, being optimistic is maybe the most practical way and good for mental health because people can\'t do anything more.
>> In that case, being optimistic may be the most practical way and is also good for mental health especially when people can\'t do anything more.
In other cases, being optimistic can be more helpful.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In some cases, being optimistic can be more helpful.
Being optimistic is often considered as being negative but I think they are different.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Being optimistic is often viewed as being negative but I think they are two different things.
Observing both good and bad sides is an exact meaning of practical attitude.
>> Observing both good and bad sides is an exact meaning of a practical attitude.
Therefore being practical until reach a certain level and being optimistic when waiting the result might be a good way to maintain inner peace.
>> Therefore, being practical until you reach a certain level of expectation and being optimistic when waiting for the result might be a good way to maintain inner peace.
Whew! This day is about to end for me at work.
Everything is going well so far. ^_^
Thank you for writing this wonderful essay.
I am also a practical person and I tend to mix the attitudes of being optimistic and realistic.
When I do something, I give it my best shot and I do everything that I can.
If it doesn\'t go well, so be it.
But I know for a fact that I did everything that I could.
Anyhow, that\'s just how I do things.
I always aim for good results.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
If I have to choose one between being realistic and optimistic, I would to choose to be realistic.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If I need to choose between being realistic and optimistic, I would go for being realistic.
Both have their own usage in different situations.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Both have their own purposes in different situations.
Optimistic behavior is helpful when people do everything they can do.
>> An optimistic behavior is helpful when people do everything they can do.
Even when people do their best, there are still role of luck to succeed.
>> Even when people do their best, luck still has a role to success.
In that case, being optimistic is maybe the most practical way and good for mental health because people can\'t do anything more.
>> In that case, being optimistic may be the most practical way and is also good for mental health especially when people can\'t do anything more.
In other cases, being optimistic can be more helpful.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In some cases, being optimistic can be more helpful.
Being optimistic is often considered as being negative but I think they are different.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Being optimistic is often viewed as being negative but I think they are two different things.
Observing both good and bad sides is an exact meaning of practical attitude.
>> Observing both good and bad sides is an exact meaning of a practical attitude.
Therefore being practical until reach a certain level and being optimistic when waiting the result might be a good way to maintain inner peace.
>> Therefore, being practical until you reach a certain level of expectation and being optimistic when waiting for the result might be a good way to maintain inner peace.
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