homework
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Tell what to do in an earthquake.
I have not experienced an earthquake.
But I have seen on television what to do when an earthquake happens. First, we go out into a larger space. Otherwise, we have to hide under the desk. But if people are embarrassed and surprised, I think that people don't think so.
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Hello Julie.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
Here are my corrections for you:
I have not experienced an earthquake.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> I have never experienced an earthquake.
But I have seen on television what to do when an earthquake happens.
>> But I have watched on television the things that I need to do when there\'s an earthquake.
First, we go out into a larger space.
>> First, we need to go into an open space.
Otherwise, we have to hide under the desk.
>> If we can\'t, we need to hide under a desk.
But if people are embarrassed and surprised, I think that people don\'t think so.
>> But if people are shocked and scared, I don\'t think they can focus.
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