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2017-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. By far the most noticeable blemishes on the surface of the Sun that are sunspots. 2. Greece's achievement in the 2004 Olympics raise anew the question of whether Athens should be the permanent home of the Games. Which part is wrong in the sentence? raise anew achievement in the whether should be raise anew 3. _____ are poor observers of their child's behavior so deviant behavior reaches unmanageable proportions. if parents Parents that When parents Parents If parents 4. The hospital is now discounting 10 standard operations and _____ , ranging from having a baby and treating a cataract to undergoing a heart bypass. equipment equipment visits procedures medication 5. Apple Computer has unveiled its new desktop computer design, _____ all disk drives and processors into a flat display less than two inches thick which integrates which includes enclosing which contains which integrates

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition today! You are a very diligent student! Keep it up! Take care and see you in class!

T. JanE ^^

1. By far the most noticeable blemishes on the surface of the Sun that are sunspots.
>> Correct
2. Greece\'s achievement in the 2004 Olympics raise anew the question of whether Athens should be the permanent home of the Games.
Which part is wrong in the sentence? raise anew
achievement in the
whether
should be
raise anew
>> Correct
3. _____ are poor observers of their child\'s behavior so deviant behavior reaches unmanageable proportions. if parents
Parents that
When parents
Parents
If parents
>> _Parents_ are poor observers of their child\'s behavior so deviant behavior reaches unmanageable proportions.
4. The hospital is now discounting 10 standard operations and _____ , ranging from having a baby and treating a cataract to undergoing a heart bypass. equipment
equipment
visits
procedures
medication
>> The hospital is now discounting 10 standard operations and _procedures_ , ranging from having a baby and treating a cataract to undergoing a heart bypass.
5. Apple Computer has unveiled its new desktop computer design, _____ all disk drives and processors into a flat display less than two inches thick which integrates
which includes
enclosing
which contains
which integrates

>> Correct

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