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2017-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi It was pleasure to meet you before i write down composition can you do me a favor? I used to write my diary here in 6sentence when i was having a class with Glenda so would you mind?? if you don`t mind ! Today was super busier than i thought . i and my co-workers thought it`ll not busy today So i back up the ingredient of food slowly meanwhile i was cooking [이름]chi fried rice for my co-workers . however all of sudden , a bunch of people were comming in our shop and ordered so i started making a lot of salmon poke , tacos . and burger when i back to the my position After big table orders are done , i put the final touches of the [이름]chi fried rice and i said " Hey boys grab a spoon and eat that ! can you let me know how taste it is ~ " they told me " [이름] [이름] Awesome " i felt so glad most of all i think [이름]chi and hangeul are the best Hangeul is the most scientific writing system in the world and no one knows who made each of language ..........~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

I\'m glad to see your name here. Anyway, you can write as many sentences as you can here. It\'s alright with me. I enjoyed reading your stories, actually. Have a good day.

~Kelly^^

Hi It was pleasure to meet you before i write down composition can you do me a favor?

>> Hi! It was my pleasure to meet you. Before I write my composition, can I ask you a favor?
I used to write my diary here in 6sentence when i was having a class with Glenda so would you mind?? if you don`t mind! 

>> I used to write my diary in 6 sentences when I was having classes with Glenda, so would you mind if I do that?  
Today was super busier than i thought . 

>> Today was busier than I thought.

i and my co-workers thought it`ll not busy today 

>> My co-workers and I thought it will not be busy today.
So i back up the ingredient of food slowly meanwhile i was cooking [이름]chi fried rice for my co-workers . 

>> Did you mean: So, I prepared the ingredients slowly while I was cooking [이름]chi fried rice for my co-workers.

however all of sudden , a bunch of people were comming in our shop and ordered

>> However, all of sudden, a bunch of people came in our shop and ordered.
so i started making a lot of salmon poke , tacos . and burger when i back to the my position 

>> So, I started making a lot of salmon poke, tacos, and burgers when I returned to my post.
After big table orders are done , i put the final touches of the [이름]chi fried rice and i said \" Hey boys grab a spoon and eat that ! 

>> After the big table orders are done, I put the final touches of the [이름]chi fried rice and I said \" Hey boys grab a spoon and eat that!\"

can you let me know how taste it is ~ \" they told me \" [이름] [이름] 

>> I asked, \"Can you tell me how it taste [이름] [이름]?\"
Awesome \" i felt so glad
>> He said it\'s awesome, I felt so glad after hearing it.
most of all i think [이름]chi and hangeul are the best

>> Most of all, I think [이름]chi and hangeul are the best.
Hangeul is the most scientific writing system in the world and no one knows who made each of language ..........~

>> Hangeul is the most scientific writing system in the world and no one knows who invented it.

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