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2017-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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If I could train an animal, I would like to train a horse. Horses are a very useful animal, and I think they can be fun too. I have also heard of smart horses. I wanted a horse since I was young, because of their gorgeous appearance and intelligent eyes. I also loved the way I felt free when I rode a horse. I think they can be easier to train, since I believe they are smarter than most animals.

강사 첨삭

Did you know that training a horse has a lot of benefits?

Here they are:

*Entertainment

*Peace of Mind

*Exercise

*Boosts senses

Having a horse sounds interesting and beneficial right?

Thanks for sending this in. Happy weekend!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


If I could train an animal, I would like to train a horse. 

>>> Correct!

Horses are a very useful animal, and I think they can be fun too.

>>> Correct!

I have also heard of smart horses.

>>> Correct!

I wanted a horse since I was young, because of their gorgeous appearance and intelligent eyes.

>>> OR: I have been longing to have a horse since I was young because of their gorgeous appearance and intelligent eyes.

I also loved the way I felt free when I rode a horse. 

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: I also loved the feeling of being free when I rode a horse.

I think they can be easier to train, since I believe they are smarter than most animals.

>>> Correct!

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