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2017-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

I started Power english today morning. I choose 10minutes class. I thought today than ten minutes is very short and fast. Anyway, I will do english study steadly! This is today's homework 1. Mr. [Name]’s lessons are really bored . I hate his lessons. (bore) 2. My sisters are very ambitious. (ambition) 3. I am so excited that we are going to New York tomorrow. (excite) 4. Women wear these skirts traditionally . (tradition) 5. His job is to paint houses and put paper on the walls. He is a decorator . (decorate) 6. I don't like this team at all. They play awfully. (awful) 7. Are you interested in the latest developments in technology? (interest) 8. She is a very determinated woman. (determination) 9. There is friendly rival between the two teams. (rival) 10. Is it your final decision ? (decide)

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! Thank you for your time and effort in answering your homework. I appreciate it. Thank you again for choosing Power English. We think that 10 minutes is really short but within that 10 minutes, you can learn a lot. Spending only just few minutes to study English every day is already an achievement. ^^

I corrected your sentences, it\'s grammar, some capitalizations and spelling, so please take a look at it and study the proper structure of the sentences.

You also did a good job on answering your first composition, although you got some mistakes but most of your answers are correct. Congratulations! Keep it up. ^^ 

~~Teacher May~~

I started Power english today morning.

>> I started studying in Power English this morning.
I choose 10minutes class. I thought today than ten minutes is very short and fast.

>>  I chose the 10-minute class. I think minutes is very short and fast.
Anyway, I will do english study steadly!

>> Anyway, I will study English steadily.
This is today\'s homework.

>> CORRECT!
1. Mr. [Name]’s lessons are really bored . I hate his lessons. (bore) 

>> Mr. [Name]’s lessons are really \"boring\".
2. My sisters are very ambitious. (ambition)

>> CORRECT!
3. I am so excited that we are going to New York tomorrow. (excite)

>> CORRECT!
4. Women wear these skirts traditionally . (tradition)

>> CORRECT!
5. His job is to paint houses and put paper on the walls. He is a decorator . (decorate)

>> CORRECT!
6. I don\'t like this team at all. They play awfully. (awful)

>> CORRECT!
7. Are you interested in the latest developments in technology? (interest)

>> CORRECT!
8. She is a very determinated woman. (determination)

>> She is a very \"determined\" woman.
9. There is friendly rival between the two teams. (rival)

>> There is friendly \"rivalry\" between the two teams.
10. Is it your final decision ? (decide)

>> CORRECT!

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