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Good morning [이름]!^^

How are you doing today? I\'m glad that you had a great time with your girlfriend. Anyway, may this new week offer you great things and opportunities. Have a wonderful day!

~Kelly^^

Hello ! did you have a good time your weekeend?? 

>> Hello! Did you have a good time during the weekend?

yesterday was my day-off 

>> Yesterday was my day off.
So my girlfriend and i went to korean restaurant to eat a pork-back bone stew 

>> So, my girlfriend and I went to a Korean restaurant to eat pork backbone stew.
I really wanted to eat it

>> I really wanted to eat it.
before theseday i miss korean dishes , korean people , my friends and my famliy. 

>> These days, I miss Korean dishes, Korean people, my friends and my family. 

so we decided to eat a pork belly next saturday ! i`m looking forward to it already ! 

>> So, we decided to eat a pork belly next Saturday! I\'m looking forward to it already! 
You know what ? in sydney there are so many foods from all over the world . 

>> You know what? in Sydney, there are so many foods from all over the world. 
Especially my personal favorite food is indonesia`s nisorang fried rice ! 

>> Especially my personal favorite food which is Indonesia\'s nisorang fried rice! 
when i see Fackbook , a lot of people post their life with picture. to show off their life and free time . 

>> When I check Facebook, I see a lot of pictures uploaded by people showing off what they do in their life and free time. 

ordinary people wanna make a boast of something as posting on the internet . 

>> Ordinary people want to boast about something so they post on the internet.
 So by means of them , people enhance their value and feel alive . 

>> So, because of that, they enhance their reputation and it makes them feel alive.

 To be honest what if there are no any SNS , what would we use????

>> Come to think of it, what if there is no SNS, what are we going to use?