homework
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Happy Monday!
We hear a lot about risks of transport.
The perceived risk often differs from the actual risk of something.
Vehicles which have rare, dramatic crashes - such as airplanes and trains - are not, in fact, very risky to be on.
The same goes for car accidents, which can cause deaths to pedestrians and cyclists.
(Understanding Uncertainty)
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_Teacher Mayleen :)
I think the most dangerous of transportation is airplane.
>> I think the most dangerous form of transportation is airplane.
Because airplanes fly faster and higher than other means, many people can get hurt when accidents happen because of many people.
>> It\'s because airplanes are faster than other means. Many people can get hurt if there will be and accident.
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