Homework
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Good morning [이름]! I like your answer in the question \"The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. What is your opinion about this?\". Some people do believe that there is life on the other planets, some people don\'t. For me, I really don\'t think there is. Scientists, astronomies, and anthropologies study this for many years but there is still no 100% evidences. If governments are realistic enough, they would rather choose spending the allotted money for the people who are in need. At least, they have contributed for the betterment of real lives. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
I think that development of science is very important.
But I don\'t believe other planet\'s life.
>> I think science is very important, but I don\'t believe that there is life on the other planets.
So I want to spend money for poor people in the world and convenience of life.
>> So I want the money to be spent for the poor people in the world for them to have a better life.
Most of all,Goverment have to solve the realistic problem in the world,
>> Especially, governments should solve realistic problems in the world.
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