homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday [이름]!
What do you think about the long engagement of Vittoria and Sebastio?
Give me your answer tomorrow, okay?
See you!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Antillo, Italy Vittoria Celemi and Sabastio Maccaroni live in a small village in Sicily. They are in love.
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One day, Sabastio gives Vittoria an engagement ring and asks her to marry him.
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Vittoria accepts, but adds \"Lets wait until we can afford the perfect wedding. We don\'t have enough money now.\"
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Vittoria begins to shop for a wedding dress, and she soon finds the perfect one.
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It\'s long, lacy and beautiful.
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But it cost and arm and a leg!
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She makes small payment every year. She saves up for 40 years!
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At long last, after a 40 year payment Vittoria can buy the wedding dress.
>>> At long last, after a 40 year engagement, Vittoria can buy the wedding dress.
She and Sabastio decide to tie the knot. At the wedding, Vittoria looks beautiful in her wedding dress.
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The newlyweds are in seventh heaven.
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They dance, drink champagne and eat caviar.
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Afterward, they ride off in a horse-drawn carriage. Their friends watch them and think \"It\'s about time!\"
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