Homework

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for always reading my comments. I appreciate it very much. You are also diligent in doing your homework. I also want to acknowledge your effort and diligence. Keep up the good work.^^

~Kelly^^

Hello ~ i always read your wrtiing well 

>> Hello! I always read your comments carefully. 
Yesterday it was a typical monday it wasn`t busy there is no customer it was peaceful 

>> Yesterday was a typical Monday, so it wasn\'t busy. There were no customers, so it was peaceful.
So i learned how to manage in the kitchen from my master chef who inspired me 

>> So, I learned how to manage the kitchen from my master chef who inspired me. 

>> So, my master chef who inspires me, taught me how to manage the kitchen.
And he said \" [이름] before you go back to korea , take a picture of a recipe and show`em what you got !!
>> And he said \" [이름] before you go back to Korea, take a picture of a recipe and show them what you got!!\"  
Writing task: Tell me how you spend time with your friends. Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
It depends on the season .

>> Correct.

my friend and i go swim to a beach or a valley during the summer

>> My friend and I go swimming in a beach or a valley during the summer.
In Spring and autumn, they`re so busy working at this time there`s no time to meet each other.

>> In spring and autumn, they are so buys working, so we have no time to meet each other.
But in winter unexpectedly there are so many stuff thing we can do like going to ski , glamping which means you can sleep in tent and enjoy with BBQ , game and something like that 

>> But, in winter, there are so many things that we can do like skiing and glamping. We can also sleep in a tent and enjoy while having BBQ and playing some games.
 At the conclusion , Soju is one thing that can`t be missed in a korean party.

>> In addition, Soju is one thing that we can\'t miss in a Korean party. 
 every time we meet  we drink a plenty of soju . if we drink the soju a lot , one of my friends used to sleep on the street

>> Every time we meet, we drink a lot of soju. if we drink a lot of soju, one of my friends sleeps on the street.