HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
9/1 What is the importance of having a goal?
It depends on the person. But for me, having a goal guides me where to go or
what to do.
When I was young, I didn't have any goals so I didn't want to study.
I almost gave up entering the university.
After having a goal, I was happy to study.
For now, I try to make a goal to do something. It helps me alot!
강사 첨삭
I agree with you MISS [이름]!
Our goals guide us and encourage us to work harder.
I hope that you would reach your goals. C\")
~Teacher Shanee^^,
9/1 What is the importance of having a goal?
It depends on the person.
>>> Correct!
But for me, having a goal guides me where to go or
what to do.
>>> Correct!
When I was young, I didn\'t have any goals so I didn\'t want to study.
>>> Correct!
I almost gave up entering the university.
>>> Correct!
After having a goal, I was happy to study.
>>> Correct!
For now, I try to make a goal to do something.
>>> Correct!
It helps me alot!
>>> Correct! [a lot]
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