HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Going on a vacation with your family is really a great time to catch up.
I hope you could go on a vacation again with your family.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
9/5 What is the effect of family vacations on family relationships?
Nowadays, many people like to live alone.
>>> Correct!
So they don\'t know how to cooperate each other.
>>> So they don\'t know how to cooperate with each other.
Familyies are also so the same.
>>> Families are also the same.
Even though familes
live togather in one house but each member is busy to do their own things.
So there is no time to share their stuffs.
>>> Even though families live together in one house but each member is busy with their own things, they don\'t have time to share their stuff.
If they go on avacation togather, they can catch what they have missed.
>>> If they go on a vacation together, they can catch up what they have missed.
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