homework
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Good morning [이름]!^^
Good job for today. You were able to express yourself in writing. You shared a lot of information on how you spend time with your friends. Good job and keep it up!
~t. Kelly^^
Tell me how you spend time with your friends. Answer in FIVE (5) sentences
I usually spend to play game with my friends.
>> I usually spend my time playing with my friends
Because I and other friends likes game.
>> Because my other friends and I like games.
And game is more funny together.
>> And playing games is more fun together with friends.
So, I will spend to play game when I play with my friends.
>> So, I will spend my time playing a game with my friends.
But I don\'t continue play a game.
>> But I don\'t play a game continuously.
When everyone are bored or tired, we go out and ride bikes.
>> When everyone is bored or tired, we go out and ride a bike.
Or we play in the playground.
>> Correct.
We can play hide-seek game
>> We can play hide and seek.
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