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~Teacher Shanee^^,
9/7 Talk about some of the interesting people you have met while traveling.
When I was in the Philippines to study English, there are many students who
have kinds of jobs.
>>> When I was in the Philippines to study English, I met many students who have different kinds of jobs.
I met one guy who was a future P.E. teacher.
>>> I met one who was a P.E. teacher.
He has a nice body and funny.
>>> He has a nice body and he is funny.
>>> OR: He had a nice body and he was funny.
So he always makes the class fun.
>>> So he always made the class fun.
After coming back to Korea, I saw him on Tv.
>>> Correct! [TV]
The program is about making couples.
>>> The program was about matchmaking.
I could believe my eyes.
>>> I couldn\'t believe my eyes.
Saddly, he could find his soulmate.
>>> Sadly, he found his soul mate.
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