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2017-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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9/7 Talk about some of the interesting people you have met while traveling. When I was in the Philippines to study English, there are many students who have kinds of jobs. I met one guy who was a future P.E. teacher. He has a nice body and funny. So he always makes the class fun. After coming back to Korea, I saw him on Tv. The program is about making couples. I could believe my eyes. Saddly, he could find his soulmate.

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Thanks a lot for writing this MISS [이름]!!

Kindly go over the corrections below.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


9/7 Talk about some of the interesting people you have met while traveling.

When I was in the Philippines to study English, there are many students who
have kinds of jobs.

>>> When I was in the Philippines to study English, I met many students who have different kinds of jobs.

I met one guy who was a future P.E. teacher.

>>> I met one who was a P.E. teacher.
 He has a nice body and funny.

>>> He has a nice body and he is funny.

>>> OR: He had a nice body and he was funny.

So he always makes the class fun.

>>> So he always made the class fun.
 After coming back to Korea, I saw him on Tv.

>>> Correct! [TV]

The program is about making couples.

>>> The program was about matchmaking.

I could believe my eyes.

>>> I couldn\'t believe my eyes.

Saddly, he could find his soulmate.

>>> Sadly, he found his soul mate.

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