homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Your school is already 22 years old.
Thanks for sharing something about your school.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Our school is a public school which was built in May 3, 1995.
>>> Correct!
Our school\'s sacred flower is rose.
>>> Correct!
I know that our school is one of the elementary in Hanam.
>>> I know that our school is only one of the many elementary schools in Hanam.
The name of our school changed in 1996 and so it has the name it does now.
>>> OR: The name of our school was changed in 1996.
This school is having 8th schoolmaster.
>>> This school is going to have its 8th schoolmaster.
I don\'t know much about other histories of this school accept some rumors and what I heard from-but not sure about- my friends..
>>> Aside from the stories told by other people, I don\'t know much about the history of our school.
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