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Hi there MISS [이름]!
The first thing I would do if I were a famous person would be buying a house in a beautiful and peaceful place.
I\'ve been dreaming to have my own house which is overlooking the beauty of nature. C\")
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
9/8What are the things that you would do if you are a famous person?
If I am a famous person..
first, I want to wear lots of clothes.
>>> OR: If I were a famous person, first, I would wear lots of clothes.
Some companies will provide me many clothes to wear.
Second, I want to make money using my fame.hehe
>>> Second, I would make money using fame.
But I don\'t really want to be a famous person even though I can earn alot of money becaause whatever I do, it will effect many people.
>>> But I don\'t really want to be a famous person even though I can earn a lot of money because whatever I do, it will effect many people. [spacing]
I don\'t want to take big resposibilty..hehe
>>> I don\'t want to take big a responsibility. hehe
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