Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Good morning! Today is great because I can feel that our city will have a good weather, although a typhoon already entered the Philippine area. Thank you for answering the question in your homework. Answering essay questions will help you think and motivate your curiosity about the topic.
~~Teacher May~~
I don\'t agree that the best way to help people is to give money.
>> CORRECT!
People needs money for the life.
>> People need money.
But money is not everything.
>> CORRECT!
If I help someone, and he or she feels happy,It is the best way to help people.
>> If I am going to help someone and he or she feels happy for it, then I will consider it as my best way to help.
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