homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello!
Sorry for Couldn't focus on the class this morning.
I wish tomorrow will be better.
These years many people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cites. I think it is a very common phenomenon. Because of the fast industrial development most of the work on the farm can be done by machines. There only a few people need to run and check machines on the farm.
My offer to the country is build more cities to provide more job to the people in the near future.
I can imagine someday in the future all the job can be done by machines, People can take a rest all day and I can watch dramas all day.
강사 첨삭
HELLO MS. [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
Hello!
Sorry for Couldn\'t focus on the class this morning.
Sorry for Couldn\'t focus on the class this morning.
>> CORRECT
I wish tomorrow will be better.
>> CORRECT
These years many people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cites.
I wish tomorrow will be better.
>> CORRECT
These years many people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cites.
>> CORRECT
I think it is a very common phenomenon.
>> CORRECT
Because of the fast industrial development most of the work on the farm can be done by machines.
>> Because of the fast industrial development, most of the works in the farm can be done by machines.
There only a few people need to run and check machines on the farm.
>> There are only few people who need to run and check the machines in the farm.
My offer to the country is build more cities to provide more job to the people in the near future.
My offer to the country is build more cities to provide more job to the people in the near future.
>> I want to suggest to the government to build more cities to provide more jobs to people in the future.
I can imagine someday in the future all the job can be done by machines,
I can imagine someday in the future all the job can be done by machines,
>> I can imagine that all jobs in the future will manipulate machines.
People can take a rest all day and I can watch dramas all day.
>> People can take a rest all day and I can watch dramas all day too.
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