Homework

2017-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello~ How`s it going? Yesterday it wasn`t busy but i felt so busy strangely . occasionally, i feel something like this I don`t know why i think i work too much or am i exhausted? anyway , the day is coming for me to leave a couple of months left before going to korea i`m still 3 momths away from Australia I`m counting down the days until going back to korea . i didn`t stay very long in here But i feel i`ve been here more than 4~5 years . i`ll miss everyone who work and stay with me What's the best thing that happened to you recently? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences. Theseday i`m learning how to manage the kitchen and some knife skills. also i feel so happy when people eat with relish the food which i make . i accplished my target amount so i`m ready to enjoy in bali and kuala Lumpur

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

Congratulations for meeting your target. Now, you are ready to have fun! Anyway, enjoy your remaining months in Australia. You bet, the people you work with will definitely miss you.^^

~Kelly^^

Hello~ How`s it going?
>> Hello! How is it going there?
Yesterday it wasn`t busy but i felt so busy strangely .

>> Yesterday wasn\'t busy, but I felt otherwise strangely.

occasionally, i feel something like this 

>> Occasionally, I feel something like this. 
I don`t know why i think i work too much or am i exhausted? 

>> I don\'t know why I think I work too much or feel exhausted.

anyway , the day is coming for me to leave 

>> Anyway, the day for me to leave is coming.

a couple of months left before going to korea 

>> There\'s a couple of months left before I go back to Korea.

i`m still 3 momths away from Australia 

>> I have three months left before I leave Australia.
I`m counting down the days until going back to korea . 

>> I\'m counting the days until I go back to Korea.

i didn`t stay very long in here 

>> I have not been staying here for a long time. 
But i feel i`ve been here more than 4~5 years . 

>> But, I feel like I\'ve been here for more than 4 to 5 years.

i`ll miss everyone who work and stay with me 

>> I\'ll miss everyone who work and stay with me. 
What\'s the best thing that happened to you recently? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
Theseday i`m learning how to manage the kitchen and some knife skills. 

>> These days, I\'m learning how to manage the kitchen and some knife skills.

also i feel so happy when people eat with relish the food which i make . 

>> Also, I feel so happy when people relish the food which I make. 

i accplished my target amount so i`m ready to enjoy in bali and kuala Lumpur

>> I accomplished my target, so I\'m ready to enjoy in Bali and Kual Lumpur.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·