HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
9/18 Write an essay about something that you fear the most.
I fear about the darkness and ghosts but my friend told me that she fears
people the most. The reason why people can harm others. I also agree with her.
강사 첨삭
The thing that I fear the most is losing my faith and my loved ones.
These are the most important things to me so I can\'t afford to lose them.
Thanks for doing your homework Miss [이름]!
I hope you have a great weekend!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
9/18 Write an essay about something that you fear the most.
I fear about the darkness and ghosts but my friend told me that she fears
people the most.
>>> I fear darkness and ghosts but my friend told me that she fears people the most.
The reason why people can harm others.
>>> The reason is people can harm others.
I also agree with her.
>>> Correct!
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