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Oh..I didn\'t know about that Miss [이름]!
I will definitely look for the articles related to that.
Thanks for the information.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
9/20The International Olympic Committee recognizes bridge and ballroom dancing as official sports, which means that they may one day be included in the Olympics. What is your opinion? Are there any sports that you think should be included as an Olympic sport?
When I was young, I really want Teakwondo to be the one of the sports in the Olympics.
>>> When I was younger, I really wanted taekwondo to be one of the sports in the Olympics.
For Now, Teakwondo is one of the popular sports in the Olympics.
>>> Correct!
After that, I haven’t thought about it.
>>> Correct!
But I got a news few days ago.
>>> But I got some news a few days ago.
The olympics will pick E-sports as the regular sports and many people are looking forward to it.
>>> The Olympics will pick E-sports as regular sports and many people are looking forward to it.
It is funny and amazing. I am so curious about the result.
>>> Correct!
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