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2017-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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9/21 Did you ever let someone down? Write an essay about that experience. Of course I did. when I was youner, I was so selfish I could think about the others' feelings however as I am getting older, I too much worry about the others' feelings. I know that when I make other people down, I feel also terrible

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I understand how you feel Miss [이름]!

As we grow older, we become more mature to think about the consequences of our actions.

Thanks for writing this.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

9/21 Did you ever let someone down? Write an essay about that experience.
Of course I did.

>>> Correct!

when I was youner, I was so selfish I could think about the others\' feelings however as I am getting older, I too much worry about the others\' feelings.

>>> When I was younger, I was so selfish I could not think about others\' feelings. However, as I am getting older, I worry about other people\'s feelings.

I know that when I make other people down, I feel also terrible

>>> I know that when I let down other people, I will also feel terrible.

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