homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You are such a sweet friend. You manage to keep in touch with them regularly. Stay nice to all your friends. :)
~t. Kelly^^
How do you keep your relationship with your friends? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
I play with my friends once a week.
>> Correct.
And,I heard my friend\'s opinions.
>> And, I listen to my friends opinions.
I help my friends that they are hard to something,too.
>> I help my friends when they are facing a difficult time.
I make arrangements and play with my friends who live far away.
>> Correct.
And I sent to lot of messeges to friends who live far away.
>> And, I sent to lot of messages to friends who live far away.
So, I am good to every relationship with my friends now.
>> So, I have a relationship with my friends.
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