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2017-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Who is your male best friend? Please describe him. Answer in FIVE (5) sentences My best friend is No-Sung-Yun. We meet after we borned. My mom and his mom became intimate. So, we are the best friend now. He likes to eat something and used a lot of gags. So, I lagh when he used gags. And he loves to play a game like me. So, I like him.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong hun!

Thank you for sharing a lot of information about your male best friend. I think, he is really funny.^^

~t. Kelly^^

Who is your male best friend? Please describe him. Answer in FIVE (5) sentences
My best friend is No-Sung-Yun.

>> Correct.
We meet after we borned.

>> We met after we were born.
My mom and his mom became intimate.

>> Correct.
So, we are the best friend now.

>> So, we are best friends now.
He likes to eat something and used a lot of gags.

>> He likes to eat something and share a lot of jokes.
So, I lagh when he used gags.

>> So, I laugh at his jokes.
And he loves to play a game like me.

>> Correct.
So, I like him.

>> Correct.

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