Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
I\'m glad that you had blast last weekend. It\'s really important to find time to rest and enjoy after working hard. Anyway, that pork belly must be delectable.^^
~Kelly^^
Hello how was your weekend???
>> Hello! How was your weekend?
i spent good weekends very well
>> I spent a good weekend.
>> I spent my weekend very well.
Last Sunday was my day off .
>> Correct.
so as i told you i went to korean BBQ restaurant to eat a Pork Belly with my girlfriend !
>> So, as i told you, I went to a Korean BBQ restaurant to eat pork belly with my girlfriend!
it wasn`t just typical the pork belly it was the best the pork Belly i`ve ever had in Sydney.
>> It wasn\'t just a typical pork belly; it was the best pork belly I\'ve ever had in Sydney.
maybe we`ll go there again or not after eating it , we went to inspect a house which have to live .
>> Maybe, we will go there again, not to eat pork belly, but, we want to inspect a house where we have to live.
it turned out a house owner was same person i knew .
>> It turned out that I know the owner of the house.
somehow when i saw from a distance , she`s very familer .
>> When I saw her from a distance, she looked familiar.
i was so shocked that she was in there
>> I was so shocked that she was in there.
Ah we used to work together one year ago in korean restaurant
>> We used to work together in a Korean restaurant.
I realized it really is a small world !
>> I realized it really is a small world!
Writing task: Should companies ban their employees from using social networking sites at work? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
Companies should allow to their employees to use social networking sites at work
>> Companies should allow their employees to use social networking sites at work.
It`s not good too much work sometimes you have to work as resting and checking a phone
>> It\'s not good to work too much, sometimes you have find time to rest and check your phone.
Otherwise i guess you`ll get stressed .
>> Otherwise, I guess you\'ll get stress.
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