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2017-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I think that companies should not ban their employees from using social networking sites at work. Because social networking sites are efficient at working for sharing information. Companies maybe worry about doing other things. However, employees are free and they must complete the work. In business, it's every man for himself.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

Thank you for your diligence in doing your homework. Keep it up!

~Kelly^^

I think that companies should not ban their employees from using social networking sites at work.

>> Correct.
Because social networking sites are efficient at working for sharing information.

>> Because social networking sites are efficient at work for sharing information.
Companies maybe worry about doing other things.

>> Companies may worry about doing other things.

>> Employers are worried that employees do other things at work.
However, employees are free and they must complete the work.

>> However, employees are free and they must finish their work.
In business, it\'s every man for himself.

>> Correct.

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