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2017-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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9/26 Write an essay on what are you most thankful for in life. When I was younger, I always complained what I had. Even though I was happy, I couldn't realized. As I grown up, I realized that I am so lucky what I have for now. Health, People around me, job, things what I have and so on. Everything makes me special.

강사 첨삭

Sometimes we don\'t actually realize how blessed we are until we lose something special to us.

It\'s the nature of human to complain about things no matter how good they are.

It\'s a good thing you realized how ucky you are.

See you tomorrow. C\")

~Teacher Shanee^^,


9/26 Write an essay on what are you most thankful for in life.

When I was younger, I always complained what I had.

>>> When I was younger, I always complained about what I had.
 Even though I was happy, I couldn\'t realized.

>>> Even though I was happy, I couldn\'t realize I was lucky.
 As I grown up, I realized that I am so lucky what I have for now.

>>> As I grew older, I realized that I am so lucky for all the things I have.
 Health, People around me, job, things what I have and so on.

>>> I am healthy, I have my loved ones, a job and a lot of things.
 Everything makes me special.

>>> Correct!

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