Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
This is very sweet. James! I think that\'s what your daughter got from you. Thank goodness!
You just made my day! I ought to thank you for this. And you kind of surprised me. Are you truly back on track? I hope so.
Take it easy at work and stay on easy street, my friend.
All the best!
-Klein-
How can we be on easy street?
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In order to be on easy street in my life, I need much money.
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As you know I don\'t have much money, so it is difficult to enjoy material wealth.
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But I have a family, my wife, my son and my daughter.
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Although I don\'t have money, I am happy because of them.
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They give me power and pleasant for my life.
>>They give me power and pleasure in my life.
Especially, my daughter has many talents so she makes me happy.
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I think the condition of happiness is nothing to do with amount of money.
>>I think the condition of happiness has nothing to do with the amount of money.
I am working hard for my family and my family members know it.
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Although I am not rich, I am happy to live with understanding each other.
>>Although I am not rich, I am happy to live with our understanding for each other.
I am on easy street nowadays.
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