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2017-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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How can we be on easy street? ==> In order to be on easy street in my life, I need much money. As you know I don't have much money, so it is difficult to enjoy material wealth. But I have a family, my wife, my son and my daughter. Although I don't have money, I am happy because of them. They give me power and pleasant for my life. Especially, my daughter has many talents so she makes me happy. I think the condition of happiness is nothing to do with amount of money. I am working hard for my family and my family members know it. Although I am not rich, I am happy to live with understanding each other. I am on easy street nowadays.

강사 첨삭

This is very sweet. James! I think that\'s what your daughter got from you. Thank goodness!

You just made my day! I ought to thank you for this. And you kind of surprised me. Are you truly back on track? I hope so.

Take it easy at work and stay on easy street, my friend.

All the best!

-Klein-

How can we be on easy street?
 ==>
 In order to be on easy street in my life, I need much money.

>>Correct
 As you know I don\'t have much money, so it is difficult to enjoy material wealth.

>>Correct
 But I have a family, my wife, my son and my daughter.
 
>>Correct

Although I don\'t have money, I am happy because of them.
 
>>Correct

They give me power and pleasant for my life.
 
>>They give me power and pleasure in my life.

Especially, my daughter has many talents so she makes me happy.
 
>>Correct

I think the condition of happiness is nothing to do with amount of money.
>>I think the condition of happiness has nothing to do with the amount of money.

I am working hard for my family and my family members know it.
 
>>Correct

Although I am not rich, I am happy to live with understanding each other.
>>Although I am not rich, I am happy to live with our understanding for each other.
I am on easy street nowadays.

>>Correct

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