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Hi [이름]!
I admire your positive attitude towards things. Just keep it up and continue to focus on the things you enjoy doing to keep you motivated.
Enjoy the rest of your day~!
~Kelly^^
<What do you do to keep your motivation?>
First of all, I always try to think positively everything to keep my motivation.
>> First of all, I always try to think positively in everything to keep my motivation.
If I hear negative thoughts, I try to discard that.
>> If I hear negative thoughts,. I try to ignore them.
Because the negative thoughts make me discouraged.
>> Because those negative thoughts make me discouraged.
Last, I always do things which I love for keeping my motivation.
>> Lastly, I always do things which I love to keep me motivated.
What I want makes me encouraged.
>> Doing the things that I want makes me feel encouraged.
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