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Take a deep breath, James!
I think your son will soon realize all of those. Give him some time. I know you felt that way when you were younger. I could remember I was a bit like that as well. We\'re like that!
Don\'t be too hard on him. Don\'t be too hard on yourself.
Stay calm and cool, James! Thanks for sharing this with me.
Have a good one!
-Klein-
When do you feel you’re off your rocker?
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Sometimes I am angry with my son because he doesn\'t listen my words.
>>Sometimes, I am angry with my son because he doesn\'t listen to my words.
I want him to be a good person, so I nag a lot to him.
>>I want him to be a good person, so I nag him a lot.
So I told several times to him about his future, but he doesn\'t listen carefully.
>>I told him several times about his future, but he didn\'t listen carefully.
At that time, I really feel I am off my rocker.
>>At that time, I really felt I was off my rocker.
I think the words what I say is helpful for him (It\'s just in my opinion) but he doesn\'t understand my meaning.
>>I think the words that I say are helpful to him, but he doesn\'t understand what I mean.
>>In my opinion, my words are helpful to him, but he doesn\'t understand them.
Anyway I always pray my son to be well and it is a feeling of parents.
>>Anyway, I always pray that my son will be good, which is the feeling of parents.
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