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2017-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Writing task: What do you do to keep your motivation? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences. There are 3methods to keep motivation First of all , early to bed , early to rise sleep at 11:30pm ~ 1:00am and get up at 7am ! Second of all , always try to look on the bright side If you live alone a foreigh country , you can feel depressed and think negative . so you have to meet someone and talk then get a job next do it as you like Third of all , find what you want to do something and enjoy As for me , i`m so proud with my job as chef . before i became a chef , i had no confidence i used to think what i`ll do as living here and what am i gonna do when i go back to korea ? but now i realize what to do next So i`d say is you can do what you want no matter what other people say about it

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Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing the things that motivate you in life. Keep aiming for the best!

~Kelly^^

Writing task: What do you do to keep your motivation? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
There are 3methods to keep motivation 

>> There are three methods that keep me motivated.

First of all , early to bed , early to rise sleep at 11:30pm ~ 1:00am and get up at 7am ! 
>> First of all, I go to bed early and sleep from
11:30pm ~ 1:00am. I get at 7 a.m.
Second of all , always try to look on the bright side If you live alone a foreigh country , you can feel depressed and think negative . 

>> Secondly, I always try to look on the bright side of living alone in a foreign country, because you can feel depressed and think negatively.

so you have to meet someone and talk then get a job next do it as you like
>> So, you have to meet someone and talk to him, then get a job and enjoy it.
Third of all , find what you want to do something and enjoy 

>> Thirdly, discover something that you can enjoy doing.

 As for me , i`m so proud with my job as chef . 

>> As for me, I\'m so proud with my job as a chef.

before i became a chef , i had no confidence i used to think what i`ll do as living here and what am i gonna do when i go back to korea ? 

>> Before I became a chef, I had no confidence. I used to think about what I should do while living here and what I am going to do when I go back to Korea.

but now i realize what to do next 

>> But now, I have concrete plans.
So i`d say is you can do what you want no matter what other people say about it

So, what I want to say is that, you can do anything no matter what other people say about you.

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