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Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing the things that motivate you in life. Keep aiming for the best!
~Kelly^^
Writing task: What do you do to keep your motivation? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
There are 3methods to keep motivation
>> There are three methods that keep me motivated.
First of all , early to bed , early to rise sleep at 11:30pm ~ 1:00am and get up at 7am !
>> First of all, I go to bed early and sleep from 11:30pm ~ 1:00am. I get at 7 a.m.
Second of all , always try to look on the bright side If you live alone a foreigh country , you can feel depressed and think negative .
>> Secondly, I always try to look on the bright side of living alone in a foreign country, because you can feel depressed and think negatively.
so you have to meet someone and talk then get a job next do it as you like
>> So, you have to meet someone and talk to him, then get a job and enjoy it.
Third of all , find what you want to do something and enjoy
>> Thirdly, discover something that you can enjoy doing.
As for me , i`m so proud with my job as chef .
>> As for me, I\'m so proud with my job as a chef.
before i became a chef , i had no confidence i used to think what i`ll do as living here and what am i gonna do when i go back to korea ?
>> Before I became a chef, I had no confidence. I used to think about what I should do while living here and what I am going to do when I go back to Korea.
but now i realize what to do next
>> But now, I have concrete plans.
So i`d say is you can do what you want no matter what other people say about it
So, what I want to say is that, you can do anything no matter what other people say about you.
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