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2017-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Creative Writing: Would you like it to be autumn forever? Why? Answer in not more than 5 sentences. ^-^ Yes. because i don't like hot and cold.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]! ^^,)


After a scorching hot summer, it is nice to walk outside for more than two seconds and not be drenched in sweat. Also, the trees burst into a warm red, vibrant orange, and a golden yellow colors. It just doesn\'t get better than that.
The new fall line is in, meaning more clothes to go out and buy because your excuse is that you don\'t have enough clothes to stay warm in.
(Odyssey, Why Autumn Is The Best Season Of The Year)


Thank you for doing your homework.^^

_Teacher Mayleen :)


Yes. because i don\'t like hot and cold.

>>> Yes, I\'d like it to be autumn forever because it\'s not hot nor cold.

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