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< Do you think movies make people more violent?>
I think that all movies don't make people more violent.
Violent movies make people more violent.
Soulful movies make people more soulful.
However, I think that soulful movies also have violent scenes.
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< Do you think movies make people more violent?>
I think that all movies don\'t make people more violent.
>> Correct.
Violent movies make people more violent.
>> Correct.
Soulful movies make people more soulful.
>> Correct.
However, I think that soulful movies also have violent scenes.
>> However, I think that soulful movies have violent scenes also .
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